Visual Arts in Education
Judith Simpson’s “Connection to the
World: Visual Art in Urban Schools,” grabs the reader with the first
subheading: Concerns (41). The introduction is not too long, but distinctly
reveals what the main ideas of the article are going to be. Although the author
is concerned about the relationship between visual arts and education
generally, the article is specific to the education reform in urban schools. The
author states that “thinking creatively and critically” is strongly linked to
academic excellence and she constructs the article in a way that links her
research to her personal experiences, therefore, reinforcing her ideas.
The author asserts that visual arts
play a crucial role in a school setting. She clearly declares her thesis in the
introductory paragraph when she writes, “the fact that two preceding notions
remain mutually exclusive in the minds of some educators has a direct impact on
the teaching of visual arts in urban schools” (Simpson 41). It is apparent that
the article will be focused on the explicit impacts of visual arts in
education. This idea is further developed when she presents her research about
how certain subjects work either the right or the left brain, but asserts that
both need to be active in learning. Simpson is also worried about the aspect of
joy in an educational environment, as well as how “art also helps students to
connect uniquely and personally” (42). She supports her statements by
incorporating facts into the article. Her belief that art opens doors for
individual connections is reinforces when she writes about the urban schools
that actually include art. The students in these urban schools tend to be
flourishing academically and have better test results than the schools without
a strong arts program. The writer also poses the idea that art allows students
to learn about other cultures and see human progression. To pull all her
interpretations together, she writes, “the
visual arts provide a vehicle for creating statements grounded in concerns
about well-being and survival, and allow students to explore and express what
might otherwise be inaccessible or lost to all” (Simpson 43).
In the first few pages of the
article, Simpson continuously supports her assertions with facts and cites a myriad
of sources. She divides the research portion of her article into two distinct
categories. The first section is aesthetic behavior. The author provides the
idea that humans instinctively want beauty, as well as the idea that beauty can
easily be found through the generation of visual arts. Art supports a student’s
understanding and grants the opportunity of deepening the comprehension. After this,
Simpson flows into the idea of empowerment, the second section. She writes, “Visual
arts give power to our ideas” (Simpson 44). Her concern about the lack of
structured arts programs in schools is again revisited. Simpson believes that “visual
language is the primal human language” (45) and goes back to the idea of beauty
since people first recognize what they are seeing before applying words. She connects
the concepts of aesthetic behavior and empowerment together. Both could easily
be employed, but concurrently there is a much grander impact that can be made. The
connection between her ideas parallels the significance of the right and left brain
operating together.
After the first half of the article,
Simpson moves into her personal observations of art in urban schools. She writes
about watching hearing-impaired children and children with mental and physical
challenges working in visual arts classes. The kids, based on imagination and
observation, were able to construct an entire model city. Through the use of
visual aspects, the students were also able to improve academically. She writes,
“they measured the height of buildings, learned about skeletal structures that
support what one sees on the outside, and talked about the connections between
facades and what goes on inside spaces” (Simpson 46).
Judith Simpson has been involved in
urban school environments for over two decades according to this article from
2007. She has been involved as a researcher, teacher, and an observer. By being
an active participant in urban schools, her essay is more profound and is
portrayed as a more trustworthy source. Her observations make the article come
together more legitimately because she “has seen fewer classroom management
problems, better attendance, in some cases higher SAT scores, and often a more
joyful learning environment” (Simpson 51) in schools with visual arts. By
presenting her personal experiences at the end of the article all her main
assertions are drawn together. This is evidently a topic the author feels
strongly about which is reflected in her attitude.
Simpson’s tone is one of serious
compassion. Her exceptional concern is shown through the research she has put
into not only writing this article, but her own personal research in urban schools.
Her dedication by being involved for over twenty years shows her compassion. The
author’s love for this topic is also shown through her statements like, “art is
a vehicle for self-expression, understanding others, and identifying with
historical references as well as providing a glimpse into the future” (Simpson
42). Simpson gives art empowerment by pointing out all the benefits that art
can provide for students. If she did not feel strongly about incorporating art,
this article would not have been written in such depth, or have been as
compelling. Her tone makes the audience take notice of the importance behind
the article. Simpson is addressing the school systems and school officials
about how art could be a benefactor in the learning process.
This essay is organized extremely
well. The beginning introduces the idea of visual arts in urban schools and
then flows into the benefits of art and how they affect the students in these
types of schools. Simpson then concludes the article with her personal experiences
and her speculations on this subject. The way it is constructed, it goes from
the broad, general topic to the specifics of Simpson’s involvement and her
ideas on the topic. The article channels together well because Simpson divides
her article sections making all of her points extremely difficult. The sections
also make it easy for the audience to distinguish her main objectives. Simpson
begins with her section on concerns to capture the attention of the audience. As
she progresses, she writes about more worries with art being valued and
constituted in schools. She also flows into her section about personal
research. By posing her ideas and issues, and then sharing her personal
involvement; Simpson builds a backbone for her assertions and strengthens the
article. Concluding with her professional observations simply draws into a
stable closing.
Simpson’s conclusion is her
speculations section of the article. She visits the idea that art may not be
beneficial for every student, but it should not be removed from school entirely
(Simpson 52). The author brings up the point that often times parents are not
educated enough about which school environment is best suited for their
children. She again pulls all her ideas into one when she writes, “I would
speculate that learning in all academic areas can become connected and
understanding can be increased through strong participation in the arts
(Simpson 52). The conclusion strongly ties the article together. By
continuously linking her ideas, Simpson has composed a well-written article.
No comments:
Post a Comment